Wow... looking back on my writing, I shudder. This is an old, old, old little story I wrote in middle school.
Editing it now... well... I did my best to save it. The story isn't the best, but I honestly didn't do much to fix it. I just worked on the sentence structure and fixing all of my comma splices.
If you're interested to compare the original to what you just read on my blog, look here.
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